Talk:Mainframe audit
I did a lot of pruning with this article-- the history section was redundant, and I trimmed a lot of jargon . Over all the content seems fine, but it should be easier to read--Bwthemoose/Talk 20:39, 4 December 2007 (UTC)
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I did a lot of pruning with this article-- the history section was redundant, and I trimmed a lot of jargon . Over all the content seems fine, but it should be easier to read--Bwthemoose/Talk 20:39, 4 December 2007 (UTC)[reply]