User contributions for Loodog

6 August 2024

• 17:0617:06, 6 August 2024 diff hist +57‎ Men Are from Mars, Women Are from Venus ‎ →‎Criticism of the book: you left out that the title the article was a direct reference to this book current

5 August 2024

• 21:0921:09, 5 August 2024 diff hist +165‎ Shattered set ‎ →‎Vapnik–Chervonenkis class: definitional clarification current
• 20:0820:08, 5 August 2024 diff hist −7‎ m Shattered set ‎ →‎Vapnik–Chervonenkis class: made it read a little better
• 20:0020:00, 5 August 2024 diff hist +571‎ Shattered set ‎ →‎Vapnik–Chervonenkis class: clarify VC dimension
• 19:2319:23, 5 August 2024 diff hist +788‎ Shattered set ‎ →‎Shatter coefficient: super concrete example with n=3
• 18:5418:54, 5 August 2024 diff hist +257‎ Shattered set ‎ →‎Example: slightly more explanation for why C does not shatter A

21 July 2024

• 15:1015:10, 21 July 2024 diff hist −83‎ Moka pot ‎ →‎Use: again, vapor pressure is only one piece of the total overpressure, as per W. King's 2008 paper. current
• 15:0715:07, 21 July 2024 diff hist +48‎ Moka pot ‎ as per paper by W King, it's a combination of vapor pressure and thermal gas expansion

17 July 2024

• 19:3219:32, 17 July 2024 diff hist −11‎ Federal Assault Weapons Ban ‎ "has affected reducing..."?

26 June 2024

• 13:4413:44, 26 June 2024 diff hist +2‎ m Precision and recall ‎ →‎Introduction: prohibitive - > prohibitively
• 13:4413:44, 26 June 2024 diff hist +771‎ Precision and recall ‎ →‎Introduction: super concrete examples where one is valued over the other: smoke detector, criminal justice

17 June 2024

• 15:3115:31, 17 June 2024 diff hist +957‎ Kepler's laws of planetary motion ‎ →‎Second law: correct proof using angular momentum
• 15:0615:06, 17 June 2024 diff hist +1‎ m Kepler's laws of planetary motion ‎ →‎=In terms of elliptical parameters: headline marker typo
• 15:0615:06, 17 June 2024 diff hist +61‎ Kepler's laws of planetary motion ‎ →‎Second law: cleared up outline
• 15:0215:02, 17 June 2024 diff hist +1,300‎ Kepler's laws of planetary motion ‎ →‎Second law: here's the full erroneous proof of Kepler's 2nd law

7 June 2024

• 14:3014:30, 7 June 2024 diff hist +254‎ McStroke ‎ →‎Production: "including my beloved wife" reference Tag: Reverted

5 June 2024

• 17:3417:34, 5 June 2024 diff hist −11‎ Jad (given name) ‎ oddly verbose entry not in parallel structure with other bullets

20 May 2024

• 20:0020:00, 20 May 2024 diff hist +400‎ Kepler's laws of planetary motion ‎ →‎Second law: kepler was accidentally righ there.

8 May 2024

• 16:5616:56, 8 May 2024 diff hist +25‎ Israeli government response to the 2023 Hamas-led attack on Israel ‎ →‎Expulsion: seems worthwhile to mention that the Sinai is Egyptian, not a part of Gaza or Israel

2 May 2024

• 20:3120:31, 2 May 2024 diff hist +1‎ Coriolis force ‎ →‎Length scales and the Rossby number: "got the attention" -> "drew the attention", tone

1 May 2024

• 19:3919:39, 1 May 2024 diff hist +84‎ Coriolis force ‎ →‎Corollaries: these are technically corollaries, but "simple cases" is a bit more accessible of a topic heading for what's really shown in this section
• 17:1217:12, 1 May 2024 diff hist +462‎ Coriolis force ‎ →‎Formula: If I'm walking north in NYC, there will be a small Coriolis force to the east.

25 April 2024

• 14:1014:10, 25 April 2024 diff hist −132‎ Religulous ‎ →‎Cast: well, that's pretty tedious, given that it's a documentary

17 April 2024

• 14:0714:07, 17 April 2024 diff hist +48‎ Centrifugal force ‎ →‎Acceleration: part of the problem is we're using the same symbol to mean different things
• 14:0514:05, 17 April 2024 diff hist +114‎ Centrifugal force ‎ →‎Force: well this is just an untrue statement. If you're standing on the south pole, the centrifugal force =0, even though r = 6400km.

24 March 2024

• 02:5302:53, 24 March 2024 diff hist −11‎ Greyhound ‎ "defined as" the fastest breed in the world? They happen to be, but that's not what defines the breed

16 March 2024

• 20:2920:29, 16 March 2024 diff hist +109‎ Jad (given name) ‎ I can find no evidence that Jews are commonly given the name Jad, certainly none of the cases here. Also removing wikilinks as per DAB style guide
• 20:2520:25, 16 March 2024 diff hist +79‎ Jad (given name) ‎ useful info that Abumrad's father is Lebanese, wikilinks
• 11:5811:58, 16 March 2024 diff hist +146‎ Gaza Strip ‎ →‎Education: why would we mention high literacy in the lede, butnot in the corresponding section?
• 11:5411:54, 16 March 2024 diff hist +106‎ Gaza Strip ‎ 95% is middle of the pack, not highest in the world. impressive but not superlative. see wikilink

14 March 2024

• 15:4415:44, 14 March 2024 diff hist −57‎ Self-determination ‎ LEDE: there should be a definition in opening sentence, not statement of category (e.g. " is a concept")

11 March 2024

• 14:5614:56, 11 March 2024 diff hist −1‎ m Efraim Halevy ‎ →‎Government career: wikilink syntax
• 14:5614:56, 11 March 2024 diff hist +1,039‎ Efraim Halevy ‎ →‎Government career: read a few things in Shlaim's book about Halevy's special relationship with Hussein

9 March 2024

• 20:4520:45, 9 March 2024 diff hist +1,378‎ Greyhound ‎ →‎History: expand on source's prehistory background findings of "greyhound-like" dogs, also Egyptian tombs Tag: Disambiguation links added

6 March 2024

• 15:5215:52, 6 March 2024 diff hist +777‎ 1991 Iraqi missile attacks against Israel ‎ Shlaim says it was a combination of Jordan and US pressure

4 March 2024

• 20:0020:00, 4 March 2024 diff hist +1,033‎ N Jad (given name) ‎ created article

15 February 2024

• 16:0516:05, 15 February 2024 diff hist +125‎ Herzog ‎ →‎Current usage: description of notable people
• 16:0016:00, 15 February 2024 diff hist +23‎ Herzog ‎ →‎See also: see also: herzog surname wikilink. the article does have one, but it's buried though I think this is one of the primary purposes of this page

11 February 2024

• 01:0001:00, 11 February 2024 diff hist +6‎ Nor'easter ‎ something strange happened here with the English grammar

1 February 2024

• 20:4120:41, 1 February 2024 diff hist +280‎ Hussein of Jordan ‎ →‎Arab Federation between Iraq and Jordan: how Hussein saw Israel prior to Samu' incident

19 January 2024

• 21:3121:31, 19 January 2024 diff hist +57‎ Specialty Coffee Association of America ‎ this helps clarify current
• 18:1618:16, 19 January 2024 diff hist +4‎ m Bajoran ‎ →‎Culture and traditions: seems worth a wikilink for caste

13 January 2024

• 16:5716:57, 13 January 2024 diff hist +173‎ Ubuntu philosophy ‎ we're at the third section before we've even defined the term? there should be a definition in the opening sentence, not a category (e.g. "it's a term")

4 January 2024

• 17:2817:28, 4 January 2024 diff hist +95‎ Kalapa (atomism) ‎ since the Classical element page has a link here, seems reasonable to link back current
• 16:3516:35, 4 January 2024 diff hist +43‎ Israeli settlement ‎ →‎Number of settlements and inhabitants: clarify "illegal" by Israeli law, not simply int'l law
• 15:0015:00, 4 January 2024 diff hist +8‎ m Argentina ‎ →‎Return to democracy: "made for a tough two years" sounded just a bit too casual/too sportcaster. I've paraphrased a bit more formally

2 January 2024

• 20:3520:35, 2 January 2024 diff hist +867‎ Talk:Palestinian genocide accusation ‎ →‎Relevance of Jewish expulsion from Arab lands: Reply Tag: Reply
• 20:0620:06, 2 January 2024 diff hist +9‎ Palestinian genocide accusation ‎ discuss on talk page first. further reverts without talk page discussion will invite listing on Wikipedia:Neutral point of view/Noticeboard Tag: Reverted
• 20:0420:04, 2 January 2024 diff hist 0‎ Talk:Palestinian genocide accusation ‎ →‎Relevance of Jewish expulsion from Arab lands
• 20:0320:03, 2 January 2024 diff hist +994‎ Talk:Palestinian genocide accusation ‎ →‎Relevance of Jewish expulsion from Arab lands: new section Tag: New topic