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- Comment: Not convinced this meets WP:GNG requirements; all but one of the sources look like primary source government documents and records.
Reply- Please see WP:GEOFEAT, "Artificial geographical features that are officially assigned the status of cultural heritage or national heritage, or of any other protected status on a national level and for which verifiable information beyond simple statistics is available, are presumed to be notable."
- Comment: Citation errors - one source point to a search engine; another has an incorrect URL that points to a duplicate source rather than the correct publication in the citation text.
Reply - These citation errors have been fixed.
Revelant text
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Under the Historical significance section, the following text was removed by an editor:
"The property is historically significant in architecture as it was designed and built in 1926 by the architect Frederick H. Reimers from Oakland, as one of the only illustrations of Spanish Vernacular architecture on the Monterey Peninsula. It is also significant in community planning for its conformity to the community planning structures of the Monterey Peninsula Country Club. To maintain the community character with a country club ambiance, individuals were not allowed to purchase property until elected as members of the club. Further measures were implemented to retain the setting's character, including clauses in deeds requiring company approval for all architectural plans."
I believe it should be added back to the article because it shows why the residence was placed on the National Register of Historic Places. This text is from the following source: [1]
References
- ^ Seavey, Kent L. (April 3, 1978). "National Register of Historic Places Inventory – Nomination Form: Olvida Penas". National Park Service. Retrieved 2024-02-29.
Greg Henderson (talk) 16:23, 27 April 2024 (UTC)
McYeee (talk) 07:27, 14 August 2024 (UTC)This edit request by an editor with a conflict of interest was declined. Some or all of the changes may be promotional in tone.
Add hyperlink to Frederick H. Reimers
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Please add brackets for the hyperlink to Oakland architect Frederick H. Reimers. His name in the infobox for Architect and in the lead paragraph. Please link to Frederick H. Reimers. Greg Henderson (talk) 14:55, 28 April 2024 (UTC)
Edit Request - Close paraphrasing
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The tag "Close paraphrasing" was placed on this article, however, Earwig's Copyvio Detector says: Violation Unlikely at 13.8% at for June 14, 2024 Please remove the tag. Greg Henderson (talk) 14:22, 14 June 2024 (UTC)
- Yet again Greghenderson2006, copying and close paraphrasing are two different things. Neither are acceptable, even if only the former is detected by an automated tool. Melcous (talk) 23:54, 14 June 2024 (UTC)
Not done issue remains unresolved. Netherzone (talk) 23:56, 14 June 2024 (UTC)