User contributions for Taram

21 July 2024

• 16:4216:42, 21 July 2024 diff hist −36‎ Jimmy Akin ‎ Replaced shock value citation and Akin's job title buried in the article with Akin's profile page at Catholic Answers which simply declares his job title to support the sentence preceding the citation Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

6 July 2024

• 17:1617:16, 6 July 2024 diff hist +2‎ Maria Goretti ‎ Changed pronoun to Maria's name ; otherewise the sentence sounds as if Allesandro prayed to Maria's mother. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 17:0317:03, 6 July 2024 diff hist +6‎ Maria Goretti ‎ Added conjunction to clarify sentence. Before adding this word, a quick read made it sound as if she died as a result of forgiving her attacker. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 00:2900:29, 6 July 2024 diff hist +16‎ Up the Down Staircase ‎ Noted the name of the character with the memorable lines quoted is Bea Schachter. current Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

5 July 2024

• 19:5019:50, 5 July 2024 diff hist −28‎ m Pete Domenici ‎ Pete Domenici was NEVER an elected Mayor of Albuquerque. From 1918-1974, Albuquerque had a Commission-Manager form of governance having adopted the switch from the Mayor-Council form of governance in 1917. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 08:2908:29, 5 July 2024 diff hist −2‎ m Robert F. Kennedy Jr. ‎ Put an unintentionally separated paragraph back together. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 08:2808:28, 5 July 2024 diff hist +214‎ Robert F. Kennedy Jr. ‎ Cited explanation that spasmodic dysphonia is one type of manifestation of dystonia as well as a review of a few current treatments and therapies. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 05:1505:15, 5 July 2024 diff hist +277‎ Robert F. Kennedy Jr. ‎ Provided citation of the original NYT article that The Guardian article cited tried to copy. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 04:5404:54, 5 July 2024 diff hist −3‎ Robert F. Kennedy Jr. ‎ Put an accidentally separated paragraph about one subject back together. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 04:5204:52, 5 July 2024 diff hist +218‎ Robert F. Kennedy Jr. ‎ Added patient-oriented citation explaining the relationship between spasmodic dysphonia and dystonia. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 04:3404:34, 5 July 2024 diff hist +2‎ m Robert F. Kennedy Jr. ‎ Create new paragraph for new health ordeal Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 00:1200:12, 5 July 2024 diff hist +264‎ Robert F. Kennedy Jr. ‎ Clarified what adductor spasmodic dysphonia is using the official ASHA webpage. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

4 July 2024

• 23:5223:52, 4 July 2024 diff hist +17‎ Robert F. Kennedy Jr. ‎ →‎Health: Claified sentence. Dysphonia is a disorder of soundmaking and, hence a disorder of the larynx. Dystonia is on organic movement disorder that can appear in any part of the body where the muscles are innervated. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 21:4721:47, 4 July 2024 diff hist +672‎ Talk:Robert F. Kennedy Jr. ‎ →‎Neutral tone: Reply Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit Reply
• 21:3921:39, 4 July 2024 diff hist +491‎ Talk:Robert F. Kennedy Jr. ‎ →‎Neutral tone: Reply Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit Reply
• 21:2921:29, 4 July 2024 diff hist +159‎ Talk:Robert F. Kennedy Jr. ‎ →‎Reference to Vanity Fair article: Reply Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit Reply

3 July 2024

• 23:3923:39, 3 July 2024 diff hist +211‎ Talk:Robert F. Kennedy Jr. ‎ →‎Kennedy Is Not An "Anti-Vaxer" Nor a Conspiracy Theorist: Reply Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit Reply
• 20:1820:18, 3 July 2024 diff hist +101‎ Talk:Robert F. Kennedy Jr. ‎ →‎Neutral tone: Reply Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit Reply
• 20:1720:17, 3 July 2024 diff hist +323‎ Talk:Robert F. Kennedy Jr. ‎ →‎Neutral tone: Reply Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit Reply
• 20:1020:10, 3 July 2024 diff hist +411‎ User talk:Taram ‎ →‎Introduction to contentious topics: Reply Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit Reply
• 19:2119:21, 3 July 2024 diff hist −3‎ m Robert F. Kennedy Jr. ‎ Undid well meaning revision by Hob Gadling Tags: Undo Reverted Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 18:1118:11, 3 July 2024 diff hist +189‎ Talk:Robert F. Kennedy Jr. ‎ →‎Regarding "sexual assault allegations": Reply Tag: Reply
• 18:0818:08, 3 July 2024 diff hist −3‎ m Robert F. Kennedy Jr. ‎ Undid revision well-intentioned by Firefangledfeathers Tags: Undo Reverted
• 18:0318:03, 3 July 2024 diff hist −3‎ m Robert F. Kennedy Jr. ‎ Using anti and mis to describe one thing are double negatives making a positive. Removed mis to make this sentence more intelligible. Tag: Reverted

2 July 2024

• 05:1205:12, 2 July 2024 diff hist +81‎ m Robert F. Kennedy Jr. ‎ Claified the name of the surgery used to relieve adductor spasmodic dysphonia Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

1 July 2024

• 23:0623:06, 1 July 2024 diff hist +48‎ Oliver Plunkett ‎ Clarify that the Test Act was a series of anti-Catholic penal laws. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 04:3204:32, 1 July 2024 diff hist −17‎ Solomon ‎ Link Bathsheba to WP Tags: Reverted Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 04:3104:31, 1 July 2024 diff hist +55‎ Solomon ‎ Added the name of Solomon's mother to the basic information needed in the lede Tags: Reverted nowiki added Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

30 June 2024

• 03:4803:48, 30 June 2024 diff hist +59‎ Kristen Bell ‎ Added clarifying information for lede. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

21 June 2024

• 09:4809:48, 21 June 2024 diff hist +1‎ Patrick Loubatière ‎ fix grammar error current Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 04:1804:18, 21 June 2024 diff hist +468‎ Al Kresta ‎ Added religious profession as a Lay Dominican Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

25 May 2024

• 21:5221:52, 25 May 2024 diff hist +364‎ m Donna Butterworth ‎ Provided additional info about cause of death. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

18 May 2024

• 21:1021:10, 18 May 2024 diff hist +5‎ m Reinhardt University ‎ →‎Growth: grammar; added the preposition "from"
• 21:0421:04, 18 May 2024 diff hist +359‎ m Reinhardt University ‎ →‎Growth: added citation
• 20:5120:51, 18 May 2024 diff hist 0‎ Reinhardt University ‎ →‎Integration: Corrected year of 50th anniversary commemoration
• 20:4920:49, 18 May 2024 diff hist +651‎ Reinhardt University ‎ →‎Growth
• 15:5915:59, 18 May 2024 diff hist −250‎ LifeSiteNews ‎ Lede only needs description of what an organization is. Additional information about v I ews, events and experiences go in tge body of the article. Tags: Reverted Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 15:5415:54, 18 May 2024 diff hist +50‎ LifeSiteNews ‎ Citation needed for claim Tags: Reverted nowiki added Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

9 May 2024

• 20:5020:50, 9 May 2024 diff hist −55‎ Cristina Parajón ‎ Clarify who the representative succeeded current Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 20:4920:49, 9 May 2024 diff hist +79‎ m Cristina Parajón ‎ Describe how the representative earned her seat in the legislature. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

1 May 2024

• 07:1307:13, 1 May 2024 diff hist −7‎ m Category:Jehovah's Witnesses ‎ Removed initial description as Christian since, in the same sentence, it notes that they have beliefs distinct from Christianity. A group cannot use the label of a specific group if it does not adhere to the same beliefs as that same group. In this case, Jehovah's Witnesses are something different from Christianity. Tags: Reverted Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

11 April 2024

• 04:0304:03, 11 April 2024 diff hist +206‎ Freddie Bartholomew ‎ Citation describing Bartholomew as one of the most famous child actors of all time needs a citation. Shirley Temple, Elizabeth Taylor, Judy Garland. Mickey Rooney, and to an extent Jackie Coogan were far more famous child actors. Batholomew's name has not withstood the test of time.

25 February 2024

• 14:2114:21, 25 February 2024 diff hist +1‎ m Kevin M. Birmingham ‎ Spelling fix Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

22 February 2024

• 16:4816:48, 22 February 2024 diff hist −7‎ m 26 Martyrs of Japan ‎ Simplify sentence Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 16:4416:44, 22 February 2024 diff hist +32‎ 26 Martyrs of Japan ‎ Clarify one long and convoluted (but well-intentioned) sentence into many shorter sentences, so the article is easier to read. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 16:3416:34, 22 February 2024 diff hist 0‎ m 26 Martyrs of Japan ‎ Ease clarity of reading by keeping verb and helping verb together prior to parenthetical comment Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

7 February 2024

• 20:5820:58, 7 February 2024 diff hist +38‎ Angelico Chavez ‎ Marked statement needing citation Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 20:5620:56, 7 February 2024 diff hist −2‎ Angelico Chavez ‎ Changed Latin Frater to Fray which is more commonly used when naming Chávez. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 20:5320:53, 7 February 2024 diff hist +76‎ Angelico Chavez ‎ Marked claims needing citations to verify accuracy of the claims. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 20:4620:46, 7 February 2024 diff hist +177‎ Angelico Chavez ‎ The subsequent information about two NM cousins used the word "however" to indicate an exception Fr. Chavez becoming the first native NM Franciscan priest. That suggested false info since women cannot become Catholic priests. The wording was changed to indicate that the women were the first native NM Franciscans, not priests. This info still needs a citation to show its veracity. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit