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Good articleAncient Trader has been listed as one of the Video games good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Did You Know Article milestones
DateProcessResult
April 5, 2014Good article nomineeListed
August 15, 2014Featured article candidateNot promoted
March 28, 2016Featured article candidateNot promoted
Did You Know A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on April 8, 2014.
The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that Ancient Trader was developed using an old military map of Slovakia?
Current status: Good article

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Reviewer: Status (talk · contribs) 00:39, 5 April 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Lead
  • Ancient Trader is a turn-based strategy video game developed by Slovakian video game studio 4Kids Games. → Sounds a bit odd to say "video game" twice in the same sentence.
  • "and Xbox 360" → "and the Xbox 360"
  • "one-year" → "year long"
  • "six people" → "six individuals"
  • "common board games" → A bit vague. What kind of board games?
Gameplay
  • Everything looks good here.
Development
  • "He worked with artist Petr Vcelka to design" → His name and title is already mentioned earlier, no need to do it again.
  • "Vcelka was "obviously" took" → "Vcelka "obviously" took"
Reception
  • "Ancient Trader received positive responses from several video game journalists upon release." → "Ancient Trader received positive responses from several video game journalists upon its release."
  • "Most critics gave praise to the game's art design and gameplay but criticized the lack of key elements such as a saving feature and scoreboards." → "Most critics praised the game's art design and gameplay, but criticized the lack of key elements such as a saving feature and scoreboards."
References
  • Everything looks good here.