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This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Peer reviewers: Paige.vogt.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 21:46, 17 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Paige's comments

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I love that you made a page for Gerry, I think you make a pretty good case that he's notable because of his theory and awards. There are some inconsistencies--you mention he retired in 2013, but in the first paragraph, you write "researches," present-tense. Are those both accurate? It would also be great to add the date he received his bachelor's degree, since you list the data he earned his Ph.D. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Paige.vogt (talkcontribs) 04:32, 3 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Paige.vogt Thanks for this feedback. I struggled with how to refer to him as he did retire, yet he is still teaching and working on within the communication field. I'll continue to research to determine what specifics I might be able to add. Thanks! Mwestmillennial (talk) 19:45, 6 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]