Talk:The King of Fighters '99/GA1

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Nominator: Tintor2 (talk · contribs) 22:05, 2 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

Reviewer: TeenAngels1234 (talk · contribs) 22:31, 6 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

I'll review this. Stay tuned.--TeenAngels1234 (talk) 22:31, 6 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

Sorry for the extreme delay.

• "he trying to spread new content". Is trying the best consecutio temporum here? Maybe tried is better? I'm just asking, since English technically is not my first language.
  • Reworded
• "The characters were decided within the team". What do you mean with this?
  • Done
• "With the Strikes, SNK aimed to give the player idea for new combos". As the first point: is ideas better?
  • Reworded
• "He thought that there will be some things that will come up, but he was still worried". Again, isn't a better consecutio temporum for the part in italics?
  • Done
• "Ono still had worries about how the game would be received". Quite trivial. Every artist has worries about how their art will be received, I guess.
  • Done
• I would suggest to remove the heavy use of passive voice for Release. X published, X released, X wrote, are better than X was published, X was released, and so on.
  • Done.

@Tintor2:That's all for now. The lead, the plot/characters and the gameplay sections look good to me. I only need to read Reception.--TeenAngels1234 (talk) 20:00, 22 September 2024 (UTC) @TeenAngels1234: Thanks for the notes. Revised everything.Tintor2 (talk) 21:03, 22 September 2024 (UTC)Reply