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12 October 2023
- 15:5715:57, 12 October 2023 diff hist −18 Diary of a Prosecutor Adjusted for coherence. (The title of the essay, according to the "Based on" field of the infobox, is different.)
30 September 2023
- 15:5515:55, 30 September 2023 diff hist +106 Henry VIII (opera) →Performance history: Added mention of the 2023 performance
26 September 2023
- 14:5914:59, 26 September 2023 diff hist +74 Michael Symmons Roberts →Selected broadcast work: Added 2023 radio documentary about WH Auden.
17 September 2023
- 15:4715:47, 17 September 2023 diff hist +1 Jakarta MRT Corrected number of trainsets, to match content of infobox in the "North–South Line (Jakarta MRT)" article.
14 September 2023
- 01:1601:16, 14 September 2023 diff hist +1 Population and housing censuses by country →Canada: Adjusted for timeliness.
8 September 2023
- 20:2820:28, 8 September 2023 diff hist +656 Talk:Hakodate →Wrong image used in montage: new section
21 August 2023
- 11:5111:51, 21 August 2023 diff hist +20 Erased (manga) →Live-action adaptations: Added sub-section titles for clarity
10 August 2023
- 15:3115:31, 10 August 2023 diff hist +95 Night Ferry (composition) Rectified name of the conductor of the 2013 recording.
27 July 2023
- 16:3516:35, 27 July 2023 diff hist −17 Mont-Royal station (Montreal Metro) Removed duplication within lead.
- 16:2416:24, 27 July 2023 diff hist −25 Montmorency station (Montreal Metro) Resolved redundancies in lead.
- 16:2016:20, 27 July 2023 diff hist +63 Montmorency station (Montreal Metro) →Terminus Montmorency: Added precision about parking access.
3 July 2023
- 22:1722:17, 3 July 2023 diff hist −1,491 Réseau express métropolitain →REM de l'Est: Removed detailed list of stations of the defunct project. Adjusted remaining text for timeliness.
23 June 2023
- 20:3520:35, 23 June 2023 diff hist −19 Le Devoir →Business: Adjusted wording.
20 June 2023
- 10:4910:49, 20 June 2023 diff hist −33 Anselm Feuerbach Merged two duplicate sentences.
12 June 2023
- 20:5020:50, 12 June 2023 diff hist +30 Central Experimental Farm →History: Added internal link, for convenience.
2 June 2023
- 12:2112:21, 2 June 2023 diff hist −27 List of tourist attractions in Mysore Undid revision 1158178807 by 74.58.147.69 (talk) Oops! It's not the same Tashilunpo Monastery. Tag: Undo
- 12:1812:18, 2 June 2023 diff hist +27 List of tourist attractions in Mysore →Around Mysore: Linked to "Tashilunpo Monastery" article Tag: Reverted
30 May 2023
- 11:5511:55, 30 May 2023 diff hist +5 Studio Dragon Misc. grammatical corrections in the lead.
21 May 2023
- 17:2117:21, 21 May 2023 diff hist +206 My Father Knew Charles Ives →Recording: Added mention of further recordings.
10 May 2023
- 17:2017:20, 10 May 2023 diff hist +15 Tram Mover Garuda Kencana Minor rewording for clarity and grammar conformity.
- 12:1212:12, 10 May 2023 diff hist −24 Gaslighting →Etymology: Removed one unwarranted "Fact" tag. While no source is referenced, this is a case where the entire sentence should simply be removed if one has proof of the contrary, which would be easy to obtain.
9 May 2023
- 20:1320:13, 9 May 2023 diff hist +7 California High-Speed Rail →Route and stations: Minor rewording.
20 April 2023
- 16:3716:37, 20 April 2023 diff hist −4 BuzzFeed Minor adjustment for timeliness.
17 April 2023
- 20:2120:21, 17 April 2023 diff hist −2 Bloomberg L.P. →Bloomberg Television: Aside from the fact that cable distribution is the opposite of “being aired” (which would imply over-the-air broadcast), the referenced source does cite the number of households to which the service is available, nothing more.
13 April 2023
- 14:0414:04, 13 April 2023 diff hist −2 Tiered Internet service →Implications: Minor re-wording to better reflect the referenced source.
5 April 2023
- 11:5911:59, 5 April 2023 diff hist −38 Samye →Gallery: Removed "Cleanup gallery" tag because the gallery contains only two images and they are relevant.
25 March 2023
- 21:5121:51, 25 March 2023 diff hist 0 Bloomberg Television →History: Manual undo of vandalism edit 1146349956.
- 21:4721:47, 25 March 2023 diff hist +5 Bloomberg Television Typos
19 March 2023
- 14:4114:41, 19 March 2023 diff hist −1 PortAventura World Corrected number of hotels mentioned in lead. (There are five hotels to the north of the park but also one to the south. The "Resort hotels" section of the article is already correct.)
25 February 2023
- 17:0817:08, 25 February 2023 diff hist −1 Dolce Gusto →Similar systems: Typo
8 February 2023
- 14:1114:11, 8 February 2023 diff hist −543 The Blacklist →Filming: The referenced Huffington Post article says absolutely nothing about filming locations except that the show "inhabits a Manhattan studio". Also, according to IMDb, the show is shot entirely in NY state, which matches what the present paragraph also mentions. Tag: references removed
28 January 2023
- 18:5818:58, 28 January 2023 diff hist +3 Dialogues of the Carmelites →Performance history: Minor grammatical correction
22 January 2023
- 18:4618:46, 22 January 2023 diff hist +36 LastPass Reworded part of a sentence in lead, to avoid giving the impression that there have been security incidents only in 2022.
30 December 2022
- 17:3017:30, 30 December 2022 diff hist −15 Ida Laura Pfeiffer →Travels: She names many cities and islands that the ship only passed by without stopping; mentioning them here can be misleading, but at least she describes those places... except for Galipoli [sic]. While the ship did stop there, it was very briefly and only to take on extra crew members. She does not describe the city at all. As such, it is irrelevant to a summary of her travels.
14 December 2022
- 18:3118:31, 14 December 2022 diff hist +9 Richard Flury →Works: Section title was misleading
12 December 2022
- 14:2814:28, 12 December 2022 diff hist +866 Talk:Headphones →Missing 2nd diagram for balanced armature type: new section Tag: Reverted
4 December 2022
- 22:4822:48, 4 December 2022 diff hist −1 In a Chinese Temple Garden Typo
14 November 2022
- 16:5516:55, 14 November 2022 diff hist −9 Claude Vivier →First attack: Minor rephrasing.
- 15:2115:21, 14 November 2022 diff hist −2 Claude Vivier →Burgeoning career: This is one of those cases where a literal translation yields a phrase that better matches the meaning of the original than an attempt at interpretation.
- 13:3613:36, 14 November 2022 diff hist +4 Claude Vivier Since the article already contained 5 occurrences of "Québécois", I replaced the two occurrences of "Quebecker" with the former.
- 13:2913:29, 14 November 2022 diff hist −5 Claude Vivier →Return to Canada: Minor wording ajustment.
- 13:2413:24, 14 November 2022 diff hist 0 Claude Vivier →First musical education: Typo
- 12:4612:46, 14 November 2022 diff hist 0 Claude Vivier →Adolescence: Typos
- 12:4412:44, 14 November 2022 diff hist 0 Claude Vivier →Adolescence: Typo
11 November 2022
- 14:1214:12, 11 November 2022 diff hist +39 Sharm El Sheikh →Shark attacks: Tagged unreferenced assertion.
5 November 2022
- 21:1321:13, 5 November 2022 diff hist +7 Street Scene Added year of the film
4 November 2022
- 18:0518:05, 4 November 2022 diff hist +2 Landshut →Notable inhabitants: Corrected dates for Winbeck
1 November 2022
- 17:0617:06, 1 November 2022 diff hist +2 Amazon Alexa →Functions: Replaced nonsensical wording.
28 October 2022
- 10:3910:39, 28 October 2022 diff hist −84 Symphony in D minor (Franck) Removed a sentence from the lead, about the "three movements" issue, which was too vague and already better explained in the "Background" and "Form" sections.
25 October 2022
- 22:0822:08, 25 October 2022 diff hist −2 Sword Art Online →Manga: Typos